12 - The big day
Language for opening a presentation
Presentation time! It's a big day for Anna as she presents Tip Top Trading's new Imperial Lemon to Mr Lime at Citrus Ventures. This is her chance to make a big impression on her boss Paul and show that she can really bring in the business. How will her presentation turn out?
Intermediate · 160921 · 2016-09-21
Presentation time! It's a big day for Anna as she presents Tip Top Trading's new Imperial Lemon to Mr Lime at Citrus Ventures. This is her chance to make a big impression on her boss Paul and show that she can really bring in the business. How will her presentation turn out? Language for opening a presentation This episode focuses on the beginning of a presentation and how to clearly explain what your audience can expect to hear.
1. My name is…
US Revised: My name is...
2. Today I’m going to ….(and explain)
US Revised: Today I’m going to ....(and explain)
3. I’ll start by…
US Revised: I’ll start by...
4. Then I’m going to move on to discuss…
US Revised: Then I’m going to move on to discuss...
5. And finally…
US Revised: And finally...
1. Narrator
Hello, welcome to the offices of Citrus Ventures! It's a big day for Anna, she's about to present Tip Top Trading's new Imperial Lemon to Mr Lime and his colleagues. This must not go wrong.
US Revised: Hello, welcome to the offices of Citrus Ventures! It's a big day for Anna, she's about to present Tip Top Trading's new Imperial Lemon to Mr. Lime and his colleagues. This must not go wrong.
2. Anna
…revoltionary laser-curve.... revolUtionary laser-curve... revol-
US Revised: ...revoltionary laser-curve.... revolUtionary laser-curve... revol-
3. Narrator
How are you feeling today Anna?
US Revised: How are you feeling today Anna?
4. Anna
Scared! I want to do really well. If I mess up and Citrus Ventures doesn't place an order, I'll be so upset.
US Revised: Scared! I want to do really well. If I mess up and Citrus Ventures doesn't place an order, I'll be so upset.
5. Narrator
You're well prepared, that's the main thing. Explain clearly how your presentation will be organised.
US Revised: You're well prepared, that's the main thing. Explain clearly how your presentation will be organized.
6. Anna
OK. Oh dear, I didn't think of the very beginning. Can you give me examples of what I should say?
US Revised: Okay. Oh dear, I didn't think of the very beginning. Can you give me examples of what I should say?
7. Narrator
After you've introduced yourself, you could say: Today I'm going to... and explain. Then say: I'll start by... And then I'm going to move on to discuss… And finally...
US Revised: After you've introduced yourself, you could say: Today I'm going to... and explain. Then say: I'll start by... And then I'm going to move on to discuss... And finally...
8. Anna
OK, like this: Today I'm going to... I'll start by... And then I'm going to move on to discuss… And finally...
US Revised: Okay, like this: Today I'm going to... I'll start by... And then I'm going to move on to discuss... And finally...
9. Narrator
Exactly.
US Revised: Exactly.
10. Anna
Right, thanks, I'll try. Everything will be fine. I feel relaxed now.
US Revised: Right, thanks, I'll try. Everything will be fine. I feel relaxed now.
11. Mr Lime
Anna!
US Revised: Anna!
12. Anna
Mr Lime!
US Revised: Mr. Lime!
13. Mr Lime
How lovely to see you. You look absolutely... I've been looking forward to this for days! Everyone is waiting in the meeting room. Come this way....
US Revised: How lovely to see you. You look absolutely... I've been looking forward to this for days! Everyone is waiting in the meeting room. Come this way....
14. Anna
Oh gosh.
US Revised: Oh gosh.
15. Mr Lime
Everyone in Citrus Ventures is very excited about this new Imperial Lemon, so I allowed a few extras to come and watch, I hope you don't mind. All your equipment has been set up so you can begin!
US Revised: Everyone in Citrus Ventures is very excited about this new Imperial Lemon, so I allowed a few extras to come and watch, I hope you don't mind. All your equipment has been set up so you can begin!
16. Anna
Hello, I'm Anna of Top Tip Trading… I mean, Tip Top Trading, sorry! I'm very unhappy to be here.
US Revised: Hello, I'm Anna of Top Tip Trading... I mean, Tip Top Trading, sorry! I'm very unhappy to be here.
17. Narrator
Anna- focus!
US Revised: Anna- focus!
18. Anna
I mean, I'm very happy to be here.
US Revised: I mean, I'm very happy to be here.
19. Narrator
Anna, breathe deeply, then say: Today I'm going to...
US Revised: Anna, breathe deeply, then say: Today I'm going to...
20. Anna
Today I'm going to... Today I'm going to present our revolutionary, new Imperial Lemon. I'll start by telling you a bit about Tip Top Trading and some of the exciting new developments at our company. And then…I’m going to move on to explain how the Imperial Lemon is designed and what makes it so revolutionary. And finally, you will all have a chance to see it close up for yourselves and ask questions. So, let's begin. This picture shows...
US Revised: Today I'm going to... Today I'm going to present our revolutionary, new Imperial Lemon. I'll start by telling you a bit about Tip Top Trading and some of the exciting new developments at our company. And then...I’m going to move on to explain how the Imperial Lemon is designed and what makes it so revolutionary. And finally, you will all have a chance to see it close up for yourselves and ask questions. So, let's begin. This picture shows...
21. Narrator
Well, as usual, Anna seems to be turning a difficult situation into a success. She used the phrases we discussed, which made her opening clear and well-structured. She said: Today I'm going to... I'll start by... And then I'm going to move on to discuss… And finally... But that's just the beginning, now she's got to get through the rest of the pitch – how will that go?
US Revised: Well, as usual, Anna seems to be turning a difficult situation into a success. She used the phrases we discussed, which made her opening clear and well-structured. She said: Today I'm going to... I'll start by... And then I'm going to move on to discuss... And finally... But that's just the beginning, now she's got to get through the rest of the pitch - how will that go?
22. Anna
…this picture shows….oh no, why isn’t it working…I should just click on this….oh, what’s wrong with this stupid computer!
US Revised: ...this picture shows....oh no, why isn’t it working...I should just click on this....oh, what’s wrong with this stupid computer!
23. Narrator
Uh oh! It was all going so well but now Anna’s got computer problems. What is she going to do? We'll find out next time. Bye!
US Revised: Uh oh! It was all going so well but now Anna’s got computer problems. What is she going to do? We'll find out next time. Bye!
Question
Where is Anna’s presentation taking place?
Answer
In the meeting room at Citrus Ventures.