34 - The business trip
Language for clinching the deal
Anna and Tom are on a very important business trip to try and sign a deal to sell their plastic fruit to a company in France. The company has received a better offer so Anna needs to clinch the deal and convince them that Tip Top Trading's lemons are best!
Intermediate · 170222 · 2017-02-22
Anna and Tom are on a very important business trip to try and sign a deal to sell their plastic fruit to a company in France. The company has received a better offer so Anna needs to clinch the deal and convince them that Tip Top Trading's lemons are best! Language for clinching the deal This episode focuses on what to say when you need to finish a deal.
1. Thank you for sparing the time to see us.
US Revised: Thank you for sparing the time to see us.
2. Each lemon comes with a satisfaction guarantee - I know you won't be disappointed.
US Revised: Each lemon comes with a satisfaction guarantee - I know you won't be disappointed.
3. I would be grateful if you could just sign the contract.
US Revised: I would be grateful if you could just sign the contract.
4. Thank you. It was a pleasure doing business with you.
US Revised: Thank you. It was a pleasure doing business with you.
1. Anna
Tom, could you let go of my hand?
US Revised: Tom, could you let go of my hand?
2. Tom
Sorry, it's just I get nervous flying.
US Revised: Sorry, it's just I get nervous flying.
3. Anna
Well, we've landed in Marseille now so you're safe... oh, I like your passport photo.
US Revised: Well, we've landed in Marseille now so you're safe... oh, I like your passport photo.
4. Tom
Oh do you?
US Revised: Oh do you?
5. Anna
I didn't know your middle name was Stanley.
US Revised: I didn't know your middle name was Stanley.
6. Tom
After my great-great-grandfather.
US Revised: After my great-great-grandfather.
7. Anna
Really? Come on we need to get a taxi. Taxi! Taxi!
US Revised: Really? Come on we need to get a taxi. Taxi! Taxi!
8. Narrator
Hello again. Anna and Tom are on a very important business trip to try and sign a deal to sell their plastic fruit to a company in France. The company has received a better offer so Anna needs to convince them that Tip Top Trading's lemons are best. Are you feeling confident Anna?
US Revised: Hello again. Anna and Tom are on a very important business trip to try and sign a deal to sell their plastic fruit to a company in France. The company has received a better offer so Anna needs to convince them that Tip Top Trading's lemons are best. Are you feeling confident Anna?
9. Anna
Not really. It was OK speaking to them on the phone but seeing them face-to-face is quite scary.
US Revised: Not really. It was okay speaking to them on the phone but seeing them face-to-face is quite scary.
10. Narrator
You'll be fine. Stay calm. They'll be pleased you've taken the time to fly out and see them - but tell them you're grateful for their time and recap what you told them on the phone.
US Revised: You'll be fine. Stay calm. They'll be pleased you've taken the time to fly out and see them - but tell them you're grateful for their time and recap what you told them on the phone.
11. Anna
Oh yes - beat the price of the competitor but get them to make a bigger order.
US Revised: Oh yes - beat the price of the competitor but get them to make a bigger order.
12. Narrator
Yes. If they order more you can offer a bigger discount. Good luck.
US Revised: Yes. If they order more you can offer a bigger discount. Good luck.
13. Tom
Oh look, we're here now. Now Anna, I hope you don't mind me saying, but just leave the talking to me. Right?
US Revised: Oh look, we're here now. Now Anna, I hope you don't mind me saying, but just leave the talking to me. Right?
14. Anna
Err, well...
US Revised: Uh, well...
15. Tom
Oh, Madame Brown, ciao, great to see you
US Revised: Oh, Madame Brown, ciao, great to see you
16. Trader
What?
US Revised: What?
17. Anna
Monsieur Brown. Bonjour. I'm Anna from Tip Top Trading. This is my colleague Tom. Thank you for sparing the time to see us.
US Revised: Monsieur Brown. Bonjour. I'm Anna from Tip Top Trading. This is my colleague Tom. Thank you for sparing the time to see us.
18. Trader
No problem. Did you have a good flight?
US Revised: No problem. Did you have a good flight?
19. Tom
It was great. I love those little bottles of wine they give out... I kept a few with me if you fancy a glass of vin rouge?
US Revised: It was great. I love those little bottles of wine they give out... I kept a few with me if you fancy a glass of vin rouge?
20. Anna
I think we should sit down and discuss business.
US Revised: I think we should sit down and discuss business.
21. Trader
Of course.
US Revised: Of course.
22. Tom
Yeah, yeah, good idea.
US Revised: Yeah, yeah, good idea.
23. Anna
Now, I believe Tutti Fruity has offered you a good price but as I said on the phone, we can beat that.
US Revised: Now, I believe Tutti Fruity has offered you a good price but as I said on the phone, we can beat that.
24. Trader
Yes you did.
US Revised: Yes you did.
25. Tom
Did you Anna?!
US Revised: Did you Anna?!
26. Anna
But to get this price you've got to buy lots more.
US Revised: But to get this price you've got to buy lots more.
27. Narrator
Anna! That's not very subtle. You need to convince them they need to buy more without telling them they have to.
US Revised: Anna! That's not very subtle. You need to convince them they need to buy more without telling them they have to.
28. Tom
What she means is our Imperial Lemons are made with our unique laser curve technology. They are hard wearing and a joy to have on display in any shop window or restaurant.
US Revised: What she means is our Imperial Lemons are made with our unique laser curve technology. They are hard wearing and a joy to have on display in any shop window or restaurant.
29. Anna
Tom, that's amazing!
US Revised: Tom, that's amazing!
30. Tom
I read it on the back of the box!
US Revised: I read it on the back of the box!
31. Anna
So, we really feel that we have a product that you'll be proud to display. And to get this fantastic price you just need to place an order of 10,000.
US Revised: So, we really feel that we have a product that you'll be proud to display. And to get this fantastic price you just need to place an order of 10,000.
32. Tom
And we can even throw in a free sample of our new Perfect Peach range.
US Revised: And we can even throw in a free sample of our new Perfect Peach range.
33. Anna
Each lemon comes with a satisfaction guarantee. I know you won't be disappointed.
US Revised: Each lemon comes with a satisfaction guarantee. I know you won't be disappointed.
34. Trader
Hmm. It sounds good. OK, I think you have a deal.
US Revised: Hmm. It sounds good. Okay, I think you have a deal.
35. Narrator
Good work Anna. Don't forget to ask him to sign the contract and tell him when he can expect the order to be delivered.
US Revised: Good work Anna. Don't forget to ask him to sign the contract and tell him when he can expect the order to be delivered.
36. Anna
OK. I would be grateful if you could just sign the contract. We'll get the lemons to you as quickly as we can. Tom, do you have a pen?
US Revised: Okay. I would be grateful if you could just sign the contract. We'll get the lemons to you as quickly as we can. Tom, do you have a pen?
37. Tom
Erm, no actually. It was in my bag yesterday but it's gone... it was a nice, a good one too.
US Revised: Um, no actually. It was in my bag yesterday but it's gone... it was a nice, a good one too.
38. Trader
No problem. I have a pen. There you go.
US Revised: No problem. I have a pen. There you go.
39. Anna
Thank you. It was a pleasure doing business with you. We'll get those lemons to you in two weeks' time.
US Revised: Thank you. It was a pleasure doing business with you. We'll get those lemons to you in two weeks' time.
40. Trader
Perfect!
US Revised: Perfect!
41. Narrator
Good work Anna...oh and Tom too. The contract is signed but now you have to deliver what you've promised. There are many ways to clinch a deal; here are some of the phrases Anna used... Thank you for sparing the time to see us. Each lemon comes with a satisfaction guarantee - I know you won't be disappointed. I would be grateful if you could just sign the contract. Thank you. It was a pleasure doing business with you.
US Revised: Good work Anna...oh and Tom too. The contract is signed but now you have to deliver what you've promised. There are many ways to clinch a deal; here are some of the phrases Anna used... Thank you for sparing the time to see us. Each lemon comes with a satisfaction guarantee - I know you won't be disappointed. I would be grateful if you could just sign the contract. Thank you. It was a pleasure doing business with you.
42. Narrator
So it's been a successful day. It's time for Tom and Anna to fly back to London and tell Paul the good news... or is it?
US Revised: So it's been a successful day. It's time for Tom and Anna to fly back to London and tell Paul the good news... or is it?
43. Anna
Oh no look, our flight to London is canceled! It's the last one today. What are we going to do?
US Revised: Oh no look, our flight to London is canceled! It's the last one today. What are we going to do?
44. Tom
Well, I guess we're just going to have to stay here for the night. I'll sort out a hotel.
US Revised: Well, I guess we're just going to have to stay here for the night. I'll sort out a hotel.
45. Narrator
Until next time. Bye!
US Revised: Until next time. Bye!
Question
What does Tom offer to throw in as part of the deal with the company in France?
Answer
A free sample of the new Perfect Peach range.