13 - The Imperial Lemon
Language for pitching
Oh no! Anna's making a pitch to Mr Lime and his team at Citrus Ventures, but her presentation is not going to plan. Her computer has crashed and the presentation, along with her notes, has frozen.
Intermediate · 160928 · 2016-09-28
Oh no! Anna's making a pitch to Mr. Lime and his team at Citrus Ventures, but her presentation is not going to plan. Her computer has crashed and the presentation, along with her notes, has frozen. She's on her own now and all she can do is talk... but what can she say? This is where she really needs some skills to help her pitch the Imperial Lemon. To pitch something means to do a sales presentation. Language for pitching This episode focuses on the language needed to make a pitch and sell an idea.
1. The company has a strong track record of...
2. We're particularly proud of...
3. The Imperial Lemon's key strengths are...
1. Narrator
Hello, welcome back to the offices of Citrus Ventures! Anna's presentation to Mr. Lime and his colleagues continues... Well, almost! Her computer has jammed and the presentation, along with her notes, are frozen.
2. Anna
Oh no, this is terrible!
3. Narrator
Anna, you're going to have to manage without the slideshow or notes. Just talk!
4. Anna
Just talk! Just talk! You just talk! What on earth am I going to say? My mind is blank.
5. Narrator
Try to remember the key points you wanted to share, and give them one by one. If you can, give some facts that support each point. For example: Tip Top Trading is growing fast - our number of clients doubled last year. Use phrases like this: The company has a strong track record of... Let me share with you... The Imperial Lemon's key strengths are...
6. Anna
Okay. Ahem! Sorry about that, I'll just have to continue talking without the slideshow. So, ahem.... Tip Top Trading is growing fast - our number of clients doubled last year. This is because our company-
7. Narrator
Yes, but try not to bark out information like a robot. Look people in the eye, slow down and try to be more conversational....oh, and smile!
8. Anna
Tip Top Trading is growing fast - our number of clients doubled last year. This is because our company has a strong track record of reliability and because, thanks to new technology, our fruits are more and more convincing. Our bananas have won awards for being the most authentic-looking fruits in Europe. We are very happy that Citrus Ventures is already among our clients and we hope to build on that by offering you more exciting new fruits. Let me share with you our latest product: the Imperial Lemon. The Imperial Lemon's key strengths are its design and flexibility. It is made with revolutionary faux-orange-premium, laser-curve-definition technology...
9. Narrator
What an excellent performance from Anna. She focussed on some key points, supported them with facts and structured her answer clearly. She also managed to relax and sound more natural. She used these phrases: The company has a strong track record of... Let me share with you.. The Imperial Lemon's key strengths are... Let's fast-forward to after the meeting to see if she gets an order.
10. Anna
...so thank you for your time, I hope you're impressed with our Imperial Lemon.
11. Mr. Lime
Fantastic Anna, fantastic!
12. Anna
Thank you.
13. Mr. Lime
Those... lemons - wow. I'd like to put in an order for three hundred thousand right away.
14. Anna
Of course.
15. Mr. Lime
Now, what's your direct phone number?
16. Narrator
Good work. Although, I must say, Mr. Lime seems just as excited about Anna as he is about the lemons. Hmm....watch out Anna! Until next time!
Question
What does Anna say are the key strengths of the Imperial Lemon?
Answer
Its design and flexibility.